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Girl Talk

That girl, she speaks nothing, but lies
Detestable is she
When one word means another
If only I could ring her neck
Little bitch can’t tell the truth
Is she that crazy to lie to someone she just talked to?
Every time I see her
Running to me with a cloud above her head
You did it to yourself
Had you told the truth,
God might have spared your “life”
Dead now to the world
Although you sit right here and mindlessly talk
I see the grim reaper come for your ego
For your soul
The body lives on, but the mind is gone
This one's about a girl I hate to death. All she does is lie and she never shuts up. No one likes her cuz she's a dirty skank wanna-be.
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cecilia Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2004
not really poetry in my eyes, just a small vent about some girl you don't like, poetry doesn't have to be refind in my eyes but this... just wasn't to my liking, didn't flow well
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GlamPixxie Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2004
thanks for your imput. i realize it's not really great, i did this in poety class last year as an assignment and i was just really mad. none the less, thank you.
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artisticknight Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2004
That is a good poem, I especially like the last lines "I see the grim reaper come for you ego, for your soul. the body lives on, but the mind is gone." Great lines.
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GlamPixxie Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2004
Why, thank you! ^_^
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Archaeopteryx-Ix Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2004
wee! Me like^^
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eminemlover Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2004   Writer
like it it's a good poem
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